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God's Forgiveness Won'T Count

GOD’S FORGIVENESS WON’T COUNT In a rural setting in a dale, close to the river Conchobar, stands the village of Corella, right at the ending of the tar. Everybody knows each other. They often do in country towns, and most businesses are busy for huge franchises are not found. All the kids all go to state schools, and most locals tend to lurch, towards the protestant united, or pews in the Catholic church. But also there are the Godless, known to inhabit dens of sin, if one believes the Reverend, when each service does begin. The Reverend holds strong belief, and to his Deacons preached, that the weakness of the flesh, are sins that shan’t be breached. But it was hot and it was humid, parching thirst could bring you down, and on this one occasion, suffered two Deacons Smith and Brown. As they passed Corella Tavern, the lure of some thirst relief, was stronger to the Deacons, than the hold on their belief. Too bad this was a house of sin, the beer was icy cold and wet, and pleasure grew with each new sip, so died the scruples of regret. Until Deacon Smith observed, Reverend parked beside his car and he was glaring straight ahead at him ducked inside the bar. Deacon Brown sighed ‘don’t you worry. Reverend is not paramount. God knows that we’re in here, and he’s the only one we count.’ But Deacon Smith has other views, now he is in fear of his life, ‘God might forgive us for our sin, but it’s not God’s who’ll tell my wife!’

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Date: 5/7/2020 10:14:00 AM
Good for them. Laurie: Maybe they can promise the wife a new dress. “A soft answer turneth away all wrath.” LOL SuZ
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 9:06:00 PM
G'day Suzanne … I think there might be a little bit of tension at the next church meeting, and it might give the Reverend an idea for his next sermon - thank you once again Suzanne - Lindsay
Date: 4/25/2020 4:05:00 AM
Great little ditty. The fear of God is second only to that of Her........
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Date: 4/30/2020 10:11:00 PM
G'day warren … she who must be obeyed, MUST be obeyed - thank you warren - Lindsay
Date: 4/19/2020 8:20:00 PM
A good chuckle this produced in me. Yes... the Lord might forgive but others won't. How true and how sad... great entertaining write.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/22/2020 10:37:00 PM
Hello Eileen … good to read that this gave you a little chuckle. Sadly it can be true on many different scales - thanks Eileen - Lindsay
Date: 4/19/2020 3:00:00 PM
Ha ha ha ha ha. What she doesn't smell won't hurt her, as they (don't) say! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 4/22/2020 10:34:00 PM
G'day Gershon … pleased you enjoyed this little yarn. What goes on in a pub should stay in a pub, but won't in this case - Lindsay
Date: 4/17/2020 6:38:00 PM
What a flow You can spin a great story Thanks for dropping by!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/22/2020 10:32:00 PM
Thank you Donna. It was a pleasure to drop by - Lindsay
Date: 4/17/2020 11:49:00 AM
LOL, HaHa - great ending , even men (and women) of the cloth can enjoy a beer - but who was going to tell, that all was not well, maybe a deacon or prying parishioner? I love this poem well penned Lindsay. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/22/2020 10:30:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … it brings a human side and togetherness having a drink together, but of course this doesn't please everyone. Pleased you got a bit of a laugh Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 4/16/2020 5:47:00 PM
This made me giggle at the end. This is something I learned a long time ago. God forgives and forgets but Man, and Woman remembers forever and talks about it to anyone who will listen, Loved this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/22/2020 10:27:00 PM
Hello Judy … what you wrote in your comment is absolutely true. Pleased you had a giggle with this verse - Lindsay
Date: 4/15/2020 9:07:00 PM
great poem, well done! I think Jesus might have had a beer with them
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Date: 4/22/2020 10:25:00 PM
G'day Timothy … I'm sure he would have - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Date: 4/14/2020 2:26:00 PM
Aye, it is well known preachers are blabber-mouths! Another winner, Lindsay! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/22/2020 10:23:00 PM
Hello Rico … so I believe Rico, but they must protect the rules of the faith - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Date: 4/14/2020 2:50:00 AM
Haha, god forgives not so the wife. Stay safe Tom
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/22/2020 10:21:00 PM
G'day Tom … this is the way of the world Tom - thank you Tom - Lindsay

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