Glow of Translucent Moon-Hiku 11-





[\|/   the night. . .s o f t l y      f~a~d~e~s  ]


[ gifts a pale and fleeting   g*l*o*w—\|/ \|/ ]    
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[ a   t*r*a*n*s*l*u*c*e*n*t       o
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Date: 6/1/2025 2:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful write’s win Sotto!
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Date: 5/31/2025 8:36:00 AM
Back with heartiest congratulations dear poet on your top win with a pleasant write celebrating the glow of the translucent moon. So smooth to read. Hope you are enjoying your weekend ( or still penning your gems!)
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Date: 5/29/2025 4:28:00 PM
Very beautiful- " gifts a pale and fleeting g*l*o*w"
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