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Given Up, and Found

Looking through the glass-- Should be better for us both; Years later I choke On tears of a faulty choice; “I have a mom, it's not you” February 25, 2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 11:01:00 AM

Sam, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~

Sam Jameson
Date: 3/15/2016 12:38:00 PM

Thank you for the kind remark, Linda-- much appreciated :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/8/2016 10:35:00 PM

Delightful poetry Sam.. congrats on big win!

Sam Jameson
Date: 3/9/2016 11:39:00 AM

Thank you kindly, Dr. I appreciate your warm comment on the work-- enjoy your day my friend!

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/8/2016 6:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! "...tears of a faulty choice" says so much. Sad but well written. :)

Sam Jameson
Date: 3/8/2016 11:44:00 AM

Thank you, Susan..I wasn't particularly happy with this piece after I posted it-- I don't think it captured the thought how I'd hoped..but thank you for the kind comment, I'm glad a bit of it was able to connect. Congrats on your placement as well! I hope you are enjoying your day :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2016 8:19:00 PM

This is a sad one. Tanka is a good way to get your message across. "years later I choke on tears of faulty choice' awesome phrase.

Sam Jameson
Date: 2/25/2016 8:47:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. It's a few in a row that the pen has gone dark...I think it's high time to get in an upbeat write after this! Thanks for your comment, I appreciate your remarks :)