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Written, June 5, 2024
For The Contest, "Swap It” (Swap Quatrain)
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich

From two of us- we grew to five; together, did our best to thrive. The years flew by with little fuss; we grew to five- from two of us. Our three grew up, one at a time; soon added spouses, all sublime! Five grandkids came to fill our cup. One at a time, our three grew up. Grandkids matured- they added three sweet great-granddaughters to our tree! Such new-found joy we were assured; they added three- grandkids matured. One more surprise, we just were told a great-grandson we soon will hold! From two to twelve- new births comprise; we just were told- one more surprise! From twig to limb, to hold each hand- a blessing from our tree so grand. Pray we're still here- though time is grim- to hold each hand- from twig to limb.

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Date: 7/2/2024 3:11:00 PM
Sandra, your poem is excellent in every respect! A huge CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/2/2024 5:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice, for the congrats and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/1/2024 9:19:00 AM
I just loved how you used the metaphor of family tree here. Your family isn't so big. We only had two kids, so probably ours will grow like yours within five to ten years. Big congrats
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2024 11:47:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for the great contest, your comment, and my placement! I guess if I counted all the spouses and ourselves, we would be 19 people plus another coming soon! ;)
Date: 6/30/2024 4:31:00 PM
Love this Sandra, what a wonder family you’ve grown, one thing for sure is you two will never be alone. Congratulations on your win in Andrea’s contest… Beryl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/1/2024 11:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Beryl, for your visit, uplifting comments, and, congratulations! Much appreciated! Sandra

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