Frigid Sunrise Passages

there were endless baubled
      babbles in her head,
yet, she spoke nary a word,
scribbled 'pon careful avenues
    neath cautious sky cover,
her notions were 
   silver lined intended
      amidst dandelion wishes,
but the waylaid winds
  always whisked them away
    as insignificant gray clouds 
         unquestionably appeared
     beyond shadow's fair conditions,
   whilst torrents smeared
       a reigning scrawled disarray,
  deluging what was left of
          her frigid sunrise passages

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/12/2016 8:12:00 AM
If I was Jack Nicholson's Joker (batman) I'd be saying, "Where does she get those toys?" Pre-coffee read — two wowsas and a side of fry-brains. Now I gotta go bauble some babbles — Ok, three wowsas. Cheerios ~ j
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 1:03:00 PM
Who reads before coffee?! :) Merci and Cheerio.
Date: 10/9/2016 5:53:00 PM
Excellent. Love this poem...let me go read more.
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 1:02:00 PM
Many thanks Maurice.
Date: 10/9/2016 5:34:00 PM
The sense I get is that, in spite of your "dandelion-wishes", the poem insists upon writing itself.
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 1:02:00 PM
You got it, thanks Robert.
Date: 10/9/2016 4:20:00 PM
It is a metaphor of broken dreams. Very well written, Paloma. So poetic!
Login to Reply
P  Avatar
Paloma P
Date: 10/9/2016 4:38:00 PM
Much appreciated Daniel, thank you!
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Hide Ad