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Frigid Sunrise Passages

there were endless baubled babbles in her head, yet, she spoke nary a word, scribbled 'pon careful avenues neath cautious sky cover, her notions were silver lined intended amidst dandelion wishes, but the waylaid winds always whisked them away as insignificant gray clouds unquestionably appeared beyond shadow's fair conditions, whilst torrents smeared a reigning scrawled disarray, deluging what was left of her frigid sunrise passages

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Date: 11/12/2016 8:12:00 AM
If I was Jack Nicholson's Joker (batman) I'd be saying, "Where does she get those toys?" Pre-coffee read — two wowsas and a side of fry-brains. Now I gotta go bauble some babbles — Ok, three wowsas. Cheerios ~ j
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Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 1:03:00 PM
Who reads before coffee?! :) Merci and Cheerio.
Date: 10/9/2016 5:53:00 PM
Excellent. Love this poem...let me go read more.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 1:02:00 PM
Many thanks Maurice.
Date: 10/9/2016 5:34:00 PM
The sense I get is that, in spite of your "dandelion-wishes", the poem insists upon writing itself.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/16/2016 1:02:00 PM
You got it, thanks Robert.
Date: 10/9/2016 4:20:00 PM
It is a metaphor of broken dreams. Very well written, Paloma. So poetic!
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Paloma P
Date: 10/9/2016 4:38:00 PM
Much appreciated Daniel, thank you!

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