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Freshly Cut Grass

So much passes unnoticed, fails to attract an eye or an ear, excite the senses enough to interrupt the mind's endless chatter conducted within the windowless walls of itself. Too often, a walk is no more than an exercise in navigation, vague passage through a dreamlike world of shapes floating the outer regions of what really matters, your own thoughts. Time thickens a spun cocoon. The day in all its glory remains out there, sunlight golden on the trees, the smell of freshly cut grass, birdsong filtering through autumn leaves - more distant now from the tightening enclave you slowly weave.

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Date: 5/29/2024 1:20:00 PM
How powerful is your first Stanza - encourages gratefulness for the moments that break through. I've read this three times at different points today, enjoyed each time.
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Date: 5/31/2024 3:29:00 PM
Several pots of tea Paul, I have many questions :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/31/2024 3:21:00 PM
Three times !....wow...a gift for this old soul. Thankyou so much DD, I always enjoy standing at the door of my poems and welcoming you in, honoured guest and trusted friend. Coffee or tea ?
Date: 5/29/2024 7:04:00 AM
Oh Paul…..always beside you in your beautiful poems.. smelling the freshly cut grass in this one! Your descriptions of what and how you view the simple things in the world is truly amazing! Thankyou….Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/31/2024 3:13:00 PM
Dear Deb, thankyou for your kind words...always happy when you accompany me on my little walks, the world is a nicer place my dear friend....take care, Paul
Date: 5/29/2024 6:20:00 AM
Hey Paul, I’m struck by its introspective beauty. Your words creatively show the unnoticed moments in life, the ones that slip by amidst the noise of our own thoughts. The imagery of a walk becoming a journey through the recesses of the mind is so relatable. We are to pause and appreciate the simple joys, like the smell of freshly cut grass before they become distant echoes. Keep writing—your introspection is a gift to us all. - Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/31/2024 3:05:00 PM
So generous in your comments Daniel, thoughtful and moving. I thank you sincerely, Paul

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