Fr - Dans Mes Reves

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DANS MES RÊVES la malédiction vaincue dans mes rêves un arc-en-ciel nous protège un champ d’été nous accueille on court on joue on rit on danse et le soleil bien qu’il descend ne meurt jamais Translated from my poem IN MY DREAMS Posted on May 14, 2021

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/14/2021 1:33:00 PM

Sorry Line, I just want it to be perfect, sometimes translation tools are not perfect, another small one here too et le soleil bien qu’il (descend) it should be descend thanks

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/14/2021 8:35:00 PM

"Descende" hurts my quebecois ears ~ it's not the subjonctif, it's the present of the sun falling. I love that you make me look at my choices and question them so I can justify or change them. I have no problem with changing words or lines where they need it.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/14/2021 3:21:00 PM

Sorry I mean ( et le soleil bien qu’il descende)