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Flowers Rain Shadows

                               flowers
                        choke up water,
                   the petals that drop flat
                rain quits my photosynthesis — 
            I believe only glasses with bouquets,
            my tears camouflaged by right stems,
                     they run in my faucet — 
                    ~ rain bolted, ~ leaves,
                               flowers

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/16/2025 6:01:00 PM

outstanding Rictameter, Paige! I especially liked 'my tears camouflaged by right stems' Outstanding poem, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2025 3:53:00 PM

flowers choke up water…rain quits my photosynthesis…cool and curious lines, dear Paige!