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Floating Caskets

Walking around the marsh with caskets
Floating in the air, Unknown hollow feelings
Tears like rivers, raise the marsh to flooding levels
Unable to see your face
Muddy steps, bog down
Wishing death was not a part of life, idle wish
Like a child's tooth fairy
Idle wish, Eternity of unanswered questions.
Unable to see your face
Wanting release

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Sue Mason

Date: 1/26/2010 3:51:00 PM

Wonderful writing here, Doris asking the impossible question ... smile ... wish I knew what the blankety, blank it was all about ... I have a number of friends who've passed and/or are going through chemo lately and its getting very strange. My 67th is coming up pretty quick and it seems like I know more who have gone than are here anymore !! Thanks for all your recent comments!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2010 3:10:00 PM

Sad tale but beautifully described in your words... death is never easy to cope with but like the tooth fairy .. the time passes and wounds are healed.. great write.. Doris.. luv.. Linda-Marie..