Flambeau

when the flames
of ardent desire
diminish
to mere flickers
as the arousal
burns out
on the wick
of endless dreams

i don't wish
to be the afterthought
carried in the smoke
of rebound passion
as a mere spark
to reignite
your imagination

i'd rather
be unlit
as a display
on dusty shelves
of old dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 10:50 AM
None of us want to be "in the after thought". Well said!
Mcconnell Avatar
December 21, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Fine piece Sandra, great imagery and expression and indeed amazing what a candle can do for you!
Adams Avatar
December 21, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Thank you so much Gordon... hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
December 21, 2019 at 3:36 AM
Any lady with self respect would act the same . Extraordinary insight to woman's soul dear, Sandra.
Adams Avatar
December 21, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Thank you Demetrios...i would think most woman feel this way... hugs
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Yes, I think I would rather be unlit too at that point. Excellent metaphor, sweet friend.
Adams Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 7:41 PM
Thank you so much Andrea :) hugs
Krutsinger Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 2:58 PM
"I don't wish to be an afterthought" - well done! So true!
Adams Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 7:41 PM
Thank you Caren :) hugs
Na Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 2:23 PM
Hi Sandra this reminds me of a set of lights for the Christmas tree that we havent used in years. We would put all other lights on the tree but this set just looked different. Well this year we finally used the lights and the tree looks and shines different. Thanks for sharing this.
Adams Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 7:35 PM
thank you Greg...always good when a poem sparks a memory in the reader of makes them ponder thoughts :) hugs
Green Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 12:06 PM
My friend, I do not think you would ever be an unlit display on any dusty shelves, you would be proudly displayed for all the world to see. Ok, sorry, I got carried away, I catch the meaning of this. The theme though a little sad is enchanted by your style and form of writing. This was wonderful.
Adams Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 12:12 PM
i was looking at an old candle...that i never lit... wondering why i just let it sit there...good inspiration for a poem anyway... lol...thank you Chris...hmmm, i was a display once at a retail store i worked at...i was the live mannequin in between two fake ones at christmas time one year...so i guess i was on display...it was kind of fun freaking people out as you waved to them... your comment made me smile, thank you for your kindness..i appreciate you my friend... hugs
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