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She feels your eyes on her like she's a criminal And the feeling is not deemed subliminal Manipulate others to see it your way Minimizing her just makes your whole day What are you thinking that she would steal from you In possessions and home, she has as much as you do The difference being she got her's all alone You relied on others to help pay for your home Following her like she's a snake that will bite As if she has enough venom to strike Dismissing her as if a servant isn’t right Putting her out like the trash every night Holding against her things from the past A couple of times when she strayed from the path Teenagers make mistakes the same as you do Why do you treat her as if she were still two Criticize her to friends and family One day you will turn and there no one will be She has about had it with your dictatorship Magnify things in your mind ain’t legit Raised her kids had trials in their teenage years If she held it against them she’d hear nothing but jeers Looking for scorpions in your snake pit Look around closely she's not that viper that spits Sorry that she has always been your side thorn You broke her and now the relationship is torn Don’t you realize yet that she is the only one left By not mentioning you deny that she even exist You brag about the children she has born Yet she is the one you act like sprang from the corn One day you’ll wake up and soon you’ll realize Her Teenage mistakes are the reason they thrive Without those mistakes, you would be all alone Who is the only one who stuck close to home Take a good look she's a woman full grown Think about that when you toss up your bones

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