Fearful

Time
End Traces
Races roar, writhe
Anxiety
Crushes kindness
Terrorizing youth search for ages endless

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Cesar Cantu

Date: 10/5/2009 8:04:00 PM

Mmmm, maybe that's how time manages to survive us all. Fear @.@, feeding on wavey lines sprouting from our spine. Thanks a lot for the experience!!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/5/2009 1:17:00 AM

Nice work Deborah, best of luck in the contest...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 10/4/2009 11:48:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/4/2009 8:59:00 PM

two-feet on-the-ground... nice write! Deb!...mail

Shannon O'Leary

Date: 10/4/2009 6:26:00 PM

Cool poem! Thank you so much for the welcome! My mom brought it to my attention. I really appreciate it! You have a talent for writing poetry! Thanks for sharing! Shannon

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2009 5:02:00 PM

Anxiety is so common now it is sad for youth to bothered by something like that. Keep writing. Sara