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'Tis quite evident, no pulchritude remains apart pellucid poetry 'pon figments' elegantly refined persuasions which are quite simply volition mid-flight delusions seizing daily routines' fragmented derangement, traipsing 'tween vague blathers' vacuous mindlessness 'midst heady illusionist's mused intentions of an inaudible presence taken compulsion o'er silence above & further the farside poetically conceptualized amenable druthers and superfluous divergency of an obscure obsession

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Date: 1/10/2017 10:27:00 PM
Your poem rocks! Reading your kaleidoscopic thoughts is kinda an obsession. Your language is pure Paloma. Ty for the fun ride to the other side of obscurity. Any poem w/the word "druthers" is a winner in my book. Love and kisses to you.
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Date: 12/4/2016 7:11:00 AM
Obscure obsession beyond the silence in which the trees are growing in no time amber to keep the words-flowers ”elegantly refined persuasions” for hidden beauty to stay. Remarkable, unforgettable tenderness of the day.
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Date: 12/1/2016 10:52:00 PM
All I can say is keep it up, it seems to work! It's always a pleasure reading you!
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Date: 11/25/2016 8:14:00 AM
An obscure obsession indeed, though one that constantly brings new thoughts and ideas to the forefront of the mind. Especially when one lands upon your page, because nothing like this (your poetry) exists anywhere on this earth or in any other realm that I know of. Mystical, enchanting, otherworldly and such a mind invader.
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Date: 11/25/2016 2:18:00 AM
As a lover of unique language, your poetry is a delicacy of fine ingredients, and your intellect a provocative engagement. Perhaps every dream, and pursuit begins as a delusion Paloma. To criticize our inspirations requires an odd moxie that can lead us to wisdom or waste...J.A.B.
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Date: 11/24/2016 7:49:00 PM
Wow! Now That is something Paloma! I don't know how you do it, but you do :)
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