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Fall In the Snow

FALL    IN    THE    SNOW

Navigating deserted street , timorously,
Seems  ok underfoot, so branch out a little.
No ice, just hard-packed snow.
Sidewalk  looks  white, innocent, safe.

Left foot treachery,   collapse to port side
Like a tree felled at random
Or a ship torpedoed.
Lie still, winded and unsure of breakages

Try  to catch breath. 
Test leg, - ok.   Lone  passer-by  offers hand
Pulls me to the surface.
Rooted again, step gingerly out once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/21/2010 10:49:00 AM
Sydney~ A very interesting analogy your wrote here I love the association with nature and your emotions! Have a great holiday! Love Laura :)
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