Faint Future

Vehicle of life carries
                                      deeds with faint future
                                  to fulfill dream of aspirations
                                     Who knows what is there

                                          Energy's every drop
                                           honesty's sacrifices
                                  expects huge fragrance of love
                                          uncertain not known

                                    Searching an expert palmist
                                         or a true fortune teller 
                                     equipped with a crystal ball
                                            will give guarantee?




For Contest: Crystal Ball
Sponsored by: Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S
Written by: bldevnath
September 14th, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/18/2011 11:41:00 AM
Great one bl...very well penned.....reads like a winner...smiles...chiquita
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Date: 9/15/2011 11:53:00 AM
And so we wait to experience the future with all its dissapointment and joy. Nicely penned bl, a lot of inspiration in the is wise verse.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/17/2011 11:33:00 AM
Thanks for your sweet comment. bl
Date: 9/14/2011 4:15:00 AM
good one my friend.....love reading this..would come back to read more
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/14/2011 10:22:00 AM
Thanks my friend for your comment, with love, bl
Date: 9/14/2011 3:36:00 AM
this is lovely and best of luck in the contest.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/14/2011 10:24:00 AM
Thanks comment for your comment and giving me best of luck for contest. God bless us all. bl
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