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Poetic Form: Limerick
Inspired: 2024 August 31
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I saw a pretty lady all alone, And helped with her taxing load to her home, Sights clear, as I've been drinking, My dear ... no need for tipping, Wife curls dainty fingers cross my chin bone.

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Date: 8/31/2024 6:53:00 PM
I really love this. Thanks for sharing.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/31/2024 8:57:00 PM
Happy to oblige my friend. Aloha William