Erotic Spring

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There is an orgy of fruit above our heads Delectable sweetness falls unto our beds We shall devour the sweetness so ripe and pure Tantalizing encounters, Angels so bright with amorous decor Intercourse woven upon the forest floors, Lustfully we be bedridden Satisfying our wanton souls in the village of Sidon

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Darren White

Date: 2/7/2017 9:36:00 AM

Lustfully bedridden. LOL can you wish that for me the upcoming few days? ;) I love erotically fruity poetry. Grats on being featured :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/8/2015 9:37:00 AM

I want to thank the Acadamy, my mother for my warped sense of humour, my cat may he rest in peace. My friends both alive and dead and alive again! Most of all I wish to thank the judge for his generosity.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/8/2015 3:41:00 PM

Nothing could be better than poets and philosophers with a sense of humor!!! Thought provoking words, and laughter, add some wine, divine!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/7/2015 9:29:00 AM

Ooh la la my friend. I think I will take a walk in the forest. It seems that's the best place to locate a bush!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2015 7:50:00 PM

And........... the winner of best comment on poem, goes tooooo.....envelope please.......... RICHARD !!!!!! Thanks Richard, you are becoming worse than even I LOL

Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2015 7:47:00 AM

I am dancing with your words with the melody coming from each line. I definitely will love to visit more of your work. This is really good and deserving of a 7

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/7/2015 7:49:00 PM

You are so kind Funom!