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Elbows and a Kettle

Elbows on the desk, hands shoved against eyes, knuckles pressed into their corners. You know how it is: you’re thinking, facing the screen. Pondering, trying to meditate, excogitate. Where is it? Where was it? It was in my mind a moment ago. It’s gone, my brain has lost it. I even ask what it was. The kettle boiled, whistled. A letter hit my mailbox. A car screeched to a stop out there. A fly buzzed about my head. Elbows, hands, knuckles, thoughts, ponder, meditation; brain plays with thoughts. Then kettle, mailbox, brakes, that damned fly. (Posted 7 Aug 2024)

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Date: 8/7/2024 8:00:00 PM
I hear, Andrew. This one resonates. SMACK! Got that fly, at least. Cheers, Gershon
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Andrew John
Date: 8/9/2024 5:17:00 AM
Thanks very much, Gershon. I'll fly away now! :-)
Date: 8/7/2024 8:00:00 AM
That damned fly made me laugh. Thanks for sharing!
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Andrew John
Date: 8/9/2024 5:18:00 AM
Flies that laugh? Laughs that fly?

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