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I have purposely included a reprise (instead of a regular refrain or repetition) in this lament.

The poets ease a troubled soul – their lyrics echo in the heart that yearns for soothing silence – a sombre melody that shadows part. Echoes drift where silence clings We mourn the scribes as truth has given way to ego, pride. The echo found in coded pyre alongside ashes piled in their stride. Echoes drift where silence clings Their tearstained pages worn folios, yet still we sing the songs of yore to glean some semblance of an art; a wisdom that has gone before. Echoes drift where silence clings Echoes drift where silence clings Optional Refrain: Yet still we sing the songs of yore to glean some semblance of an art. We yearn for soothing silence; a sombre melody that shadows part. Echoes drift where silence clings Echoes drift where silence clings

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Date: 7/13/2025 12:56:00 PM
I love this. I liked the refrain too, added a sense of immortality - beautiful, Suzette
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/14/2025 1:39:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 7/13/2025 12:07:00 PM
that yearns for soothing silence – a sombre melody that shadows part… to glean some semblance of an art; a wisdom that has gone before...nice!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 7/13/2025 12:13:00 PM
Oh, I didn't notice that it rhymes ... That would make an ideal refrain, Kim. Thank you. :)

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