Disoriented

I am disoriented, on grayish
Oh no!, this is gray, real gray

It was light blue, over the ocean

An endless wave switched off the light
Blue became gray

Gray tells about meaningless, uncertainty
As if it tells about peace in same time
But black and white still persist on their stands

I am disoriented,
Between black and white,
Between blue and gray

I am feeling so blue
Disoriented in high hopes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/18/2016 11:46:00 AM
wow, EPIC POEM. Linda
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Date: 2/20/2016 5:13:00 PM
thank you
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