Diagnosis

In the gauze that wraps the morning
                   The players poise
        The ping-pong rackets in stiff applause 
        Back and forth the humming train
        The beating wings on my tender brain
        The ball frolicking, bouncing, resounding
        In my pain
        A gulp anesthetics of air for life
        But nothing numbs me now
        Only the fear of death remain
        And the rope called strife
        Dangles on the eye
        I cannot climb so high
        And why should I
        If I go up come down again
        These players never cease their contest
        Against my wounded rest
        And the morning's gauze 
        Unravels in the lurid hands of day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/30/2009 9:19:00 AM
Interesting way of looking at life and one of its major stresses. God Bless. Vince
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