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Inspired by Laura Loos Your engraved initials on my heart poem.

Devotions emotions


                        Commitment is the key that opens the door
                                         to a woman's heart.

                            Your devotion will cause a commotion, 
                                  and love's emotions will start.

                              Your loyal love will  stamp it's seal 
                                 on her heart it will be revealed.

                               Leaving a long lasting impression 
                                      of your love's confession.

                                 When she sees your dedication
                               to your love with sincere feelings,
                              
                               her heart will melt from the flame
                               and her love will leave you reeling
                        
                                Her heart will ache with desire,
                            as your commitment stokes the fire,

                             So put devotions key in the ignition
                           and turn on her emotional exhibition. 




John Derek Hamilton
August 09,2016

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John Hamilton

Date: 8/18/2016 4:15:00 PM

Thanks Laura it was your poem that inspired this so thank you, your pen flows golden! I'm happy my words resonate with you!

Beautiful Scars

Date: 8/18/2016 3:34:00 PM

Oh John! This is remarkably beautiful! Thank you for mentioning my name, I am grateful and you are the sweetest :) You have a true gift dear man, I am very joyful when reading your words....God bless :)-luloo

John Hamilton
Date: 8/18/2016 9:02:00 PM

Thanks Laura it was your poem that inspired this so thank you. I'm glad my words resonate with you!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/12/2016 1:35:00 AM

I like this one, John:) Very beautiful:)

John Hamilton
Date: 8/12/2016 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Jo, was inspired by Laura's poem, felt good as it flowed!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/11/2016 5:53:00 AM

Insightful poem dear, John! Good for the young to learn! Loved it!

John Hamilton
Date: 8/11/2016 9:11:00 AM

True, but I know a lot of middle age men that won't commit to marriage, but that's what most women want. Thanks for the visit and comment, always a pleasure.