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Departures

I’m drawn to airport departure halls, to the optimism of leaving. The suspension of here. The promise of there. I like the in-between feeling of transit, the lightness that comes from exchanging one clock for another. And how someplace else makes you a child, everything new again. And the chance to leave baggage at home, to quarantine turbulent emotions. And the triage of broken dreams or numbed lives into myriad flight paths, New Life-bound, relocating dislocated yearnings, destination reinventing destiny. And flight: the release, however brief, from reality’s gravity, the world simplified at 30,000 ft. to a spread of light-bathed cotton-candy clouds. In motion, there is possibility. In departure, future. In passage, faith. In altitude, a soaring-free. In sky voyages, horizon-crossings. In endings, beginnings. In boarding, a looking-forward to _______. I like hope taking off.

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Date: 7/7/2021 1:33:00 AM
just great that is; superb poetic expression
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Bernard Chan
Date: 7/8/2021 7:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Mahtab.
Date: 1/20/2021 4:24:00 PM
It delightful to read this lovely poem especially in times when we've been grounded due to the pandemic but still are hopeful that we will resume our love of travel ~ so glad this gem was published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Bernard Chan
Date: 1/21/2021 4:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Line. Hope we'll all start travelling again soon. Stay safe.
Date: 2/9/2018 12:14:00 PM
Hey Bernard! I didnt get a notification that you replied, sorry it took me so long to get back to you. My email is imybowles@yahoo.co.uk Speak to you there Thanks
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/11/2018 5:29:00 PM
Hi Imogen, I've sent you an email. Please check your inbox. Thanks.
Date: 2/7/2018 1:39:00 PM
Hi Bernard Chan! I am using your poem with my students in a poetry competition! The competition is next Thursday 16th February and I was wondering if you could share some information about yourself? and the reason for writing the poem please? We need to introduce the poem and I have searched the web and cant find any information at all about you. I really hope to hear back from you soon. Imy. p.s great poem
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/7/2018 6:22:00 PM
Hi Imogen, thank you for choosing my poem to share with your students. It's probably better if I answer your questions in an email. Do you have Soup Mail or another @ where I can reach you?

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