Departures

I’m drawn to airport departure halls,
to the optimism of leaving.
The suspension of here.
The promise of there.

I like the in-between feeling of transit,
the lightness that comes from  
exchanging one clock for another.  
And how someplace else makes you a child, 
everything new again.
And the chance to leave baggage at home, 
to quarantine turbulent emotions. 

And the triage of broken dreams or numbed lives
into myriad flight paths,
New Life-bound,
relocating dislocated yearnings, 
destination reinventing destiny.     

And flight: 
              the release, however brief, 
              from reality’s gravity, 
the world simplified at 30,000 ft. to 
              a spread of light-bathed cotton-candy clouds.

In motion, there is possibility.
In departure, future.
In passage, faith.   
In altitude, a soaring-free.   
In sky voyages, horizon-crossings.
In endings, beginnings. 
In boarding, a looking-forward to _______. 

I like hope taking off.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bangalee Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 1:33 AM
just great that is; superb poetic expression
Chan Avatar
July 8, 2021 at 7:17 AM
Thanks a lot, Mahtab.
Gauthier Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 4:24 PM
It delightful to read this lovely poem especially in times when we've been grounded due to the pandemic but still are hopeful that we will resume our love of travel ~ so glad this gem was published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
Chan Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 4:09 AM
Thanks a lot, Line. Hope we'll all start travelling again soon. Stay safe.
Bowles Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Hey Bernard! I didnt get a notification that you replied, sorry it took me so long to get back to you. My email is [email protected] Speak to you there Thanks
Chan Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 5:29 PM
Hi Imogen, I've sent you an email. Please check your inbox. Thanks.
Bowles Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Hi Bernard Chan! I am using your poem with my students in a poetry competition! The competition is next Thursday 16th February and I was wondering if you could share some information about yourself? and the reason for writing the poem please? We need to introduce the poem and I have searched the web and cant find any information at all about you. I really hope to hear back from you soon. Imy. p.s great poem
Chan Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Hi Imogen, thank you for choosing my poem to share with your students. It's probably better if I answer your questions in an email. Do you have Soup Mail or another @ where I can reach you?
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