Daylight Robbery

It was four thirty in the afternoon broad daylight,
We arrived home after an exhausting shopping spree,
Pulled into our drive, turned off the engine, to our delight,
Home, don’t look them in the eye, dangerous, there are three.
No sooner had Hubby told me I had a gun to my head,
The other hi-jacker by my husband’s side, oh we’re dead
I said softly. Was wearing a lot of jewellery which they took,
My husband’s man-bag, with two thousand rand, the crook,
His cross and chain, our Rolex watches, then as quickly as they
Appeared, they left, I was devoid of fear, no emotion, I did pray.
Suddenly I noticed the same chap came back with his gun,
Was convinced he was going to shoot but they were not done,
Two more bracelets, can’t open the catch, this is scary, no fun,
So Hubby tugged and broke the clasp, fearing they would shoot
But hijacker happy with his steal, it was quite a catch, this loot!
To this day no one has news, or knowledge of their whereabouts,
It is still an open case, this happened 7 years ago or thereabouts.
It was now 4.35p.m the whole incident took only five minutes,
Their confidence and composure had absolutely no limits,
For us, we could not believe what an ordeal we had gone through,
This happens in South Africa, and other countries, to more than a few
They had followed us from our nearby mall, had spotted the Rolexes’
Called the Rolex gang, were really only interested in these watches
But got lucky as I was wearing more than expected, or projected!
No longer have any gold jewellery, sold it and gave the money 
To the needy, whose lives may become a fraction more sunny

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Dated 24th April 2021
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Ricci Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 12:27 PM
Hello Jennifer. I like titles so this caught my eye. Your story kept my attention to the end. Years back I was at a bank and I was making out my slip to withdraw money three robbers rushed in with guns and said everyone down this is a bank robbery. It is something you never forget. We were delayed nearly three hours because of the feds and the police. Years later the same robbers were caught as they slipped up robbing again. Thank you for sharing your vivid writing talent. Remain safe.
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May 3, 2021 at 5:18 PM
What a dreadful thing to happen to you and your husband Jennifer, it must have been terrifying. Isn’t it awfully bad not being able to wear the things we treasure in case someone comes along to steal them. You’ve written your story well… God bless! Belle
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April 27, 2021 at 2:10 PM
Ohmigoodness Jennifer! What a frightful thing to happen! Praise be to God Almighty that you and your hubby are still alive. Don't worry. God will get them for that even if the police don't. It might not be today or tomorrow or even in a few years but they may have already paid for what they did to you. God Bless my friend. JB
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May 16, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Hi Judy, It was frightening but God gave me the peace I desperately needed during this trying couple of minutes. Unfortunately whilst on holiday by the sea we had another bad incident, perhaps as frightening and horrific as this, what is it with us, why always us. My poem I posted was Thieves in the night. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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April 27, 2021 at 1:19 AM
What a terrible ordeal you had, Jenny....something which will cross your mind many more times, especially when you come to park outside your house. Saying that it could have been worse does not make up for what happened. Perhaps it's time to invest in a bulletproof car instead of Rolex watches :) ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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April 26, 2021 at 10:00 PM
Being a victim of house burglary twice, not nearly as bad as your experience, Jennifer, i do emphasize, and feel every word you pen here. Stay safe my friend.
Flaherty Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 1:01 PM
Eish Mev jammer My mum sister and family went on holiday down to Hiberdean Durbs South Coast. And during the night they were robbed also even took the blankets off the kids. But small mercies so long as they were safe and left alone. Thing's can be replaced but they couldn't be Love hugs blessings
Wolf Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 6:59 PM
Gosh. How awful that must have been I can't even imagine, Jennifer. I've been robbed at gunpoint twice myself. Took me 2 - 3 three years each time to get over it. Doesn't endear me to either the thugs or the police. It's a long story, but the police really blew it the second time I was robbed. Idiots. Oh, well. Water over the dam now. :) gw
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April 25, 2021 at 4:20 PM
Reads like a terrible ordeal to go through. God was with you and protected you for a future to witness for Him. Did you pray for His protection and the thieves salvation? I hope I never have to go through anything like that but evil gets bolder and the innocent get mistreated and abused more and more often. Thanks for you visit to my page. Sara
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April 25, 2021 at 1:48 PM
This must have been difficult to write after such an ordeal even those years later, you've written this very well with great imagery and descriptive thought. So glad no one was hurt at that time. Take care and stay blessed, Gordon
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April 25, 2021 at 12:10 PM
Hello Jennifer What a horrible ordeal to go through. I felt the fear as I read this poem I hope you never go through this evder again. Hugs Darlene.
Sands Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 8:19 AM
You have described the frightening experience well Jennifer. Thank God you are both alright. What a shock it all must have been. You are a shining light :)
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April 25, 2021 at 7:01 AM
At the start I was wondering if you were from South Africa. You answered my question. I understand it can be a difficult place at times. I’m glad you were both okay in the end. A horrible experience to go through.
Cunningham Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 4:29 AM
A terrifying experience for you both Jennifer, thank god it didn't end in tragedy. Tom
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April 25, 2021 at 1:56 AM
They must have been studying you to rob you so quickly. But you did an act of kindness. Kudos to you.
Laurie Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 7:14 PM
Hello Jennifer ... a terrifying tale indeed. Something like this can affect you for a very long time. Your poem gave me the shivers thinking about could have happened - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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April 24, 2021 at 6:38 PM
This terrified me almost from the start. I am sorry you went through this, but it is fantastic that you both survived. Incredible pen.
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April 24, 2021 at 3:11 PM
Hi Jennifer, What a terrible ordeal to go through. I can’t imagine the thoughts that went through your head. I know one of thinking your hubby was going to die. Something like this would cause one to have flashbacks. I’m happy you lived to the story. Robbers and thieves, the whole lot of theme, need to get a life! A good contender for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day- Alexis
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