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Dance An Erotic Dream

Dance An Erotic Dream Whispered twilight kisses sweet traces on my skin This feeling is so sensual the world just disappears Romantic murmurs in my ear sweet shivers up my spine Delicious tingling head to toe we dissolve in our desire Floating like in a fantasy we dance an erotic dream So caught up in this moment our essence becomes one. (For Sexy Surreal Contest: Sponsored by Lewis Raynes) 10th place

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Carole Duet

Date: 6/14/2017 9:27:00 PM

Very nice and so dreamy. Congrats on your placement in the contest, Lenna.

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/18/2017 1:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Carole :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/13/2017 7:09:00 PM

Greetings Lenna. Congrats for your WIN with this awesome poem!! ;-)

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/18/2017 1:23:00 PM

Hi Teddy ! Thank you kindly :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/12/2017 6:30:00 PM

Wow Lenna....this is awesome! "we dissolve in our desire"...fantastic sensual lines. It is a top winner for me! Congratulations on your win! : )

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/13/2017 10:15:00 AM

aw, Thanks so much Connie for those kind words. I appreciate you dropping by to congratulate me :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/12/2017 6:48:00 AM

A sensual tango...Congrats on your win Lenna

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/13/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thank You Joseph :)

Edward Mccall

Date: 6/7/2017 8:42:00 AM

Wow I feel I should have a cigarette right now and I don't even smoke. Such a beautifully written and sensual poem. Good luck in the contest.

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/7/2017 10:52:00 AM

Hi Edward, Thank You for those kind words and.... no, don't take up smoking now.. lol

Chris Green

Date: 6/5/2017 6:12:00 PM

Is it hot in here or is it just me...it's hot. Wow Lenna, such a beautiful and sensual piece you have written. Wow again, I am in awe of this poem. You have captured the essence of romance and deep longing in the amazing write. best wishes in the contest...I'm off for a cold shower now. :)

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/6/2017 11:33:00 AM

lol Chris, this is my first try on one like this. Thank You for your great response, it made me smile :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/2/2017 10:16:00 AM

Beautiful Lenna. Well done :)

Lenna Walker
Date: 6/2/2017 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi, that is great to hear :)