David Byrne Poet Free verse

Crusifiction

Blunt mallet wallops down,
On an iron nail, that pierces flesh,
And shatters bone and meets resistance,
In the hard wood beneath.

I try to imagine the feeling,
By pressing a biro into,
The palm of my hand;
I think I can………………..






NOTE: The Romans crucified thousands of people and this poem is dedicated to all of those 
victims.

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Sheol Moribund March 16, 2010 at 11:25 AM Greetings David: Great and interesting poem. It is ironic that the most powerful denomination of the Christian faith is called the Roman church. Peace: Sheol

Danielle Curl February 24, 2010 at 9:34 PM Ahhh this is vivid, I've done that before as well, just to see what it must have been like. Note: Crucify is spelled with a C as the fourth letter, is it perhaps spelled Crucifiction?

The Fringe February 9, 2010 at 7:46 PM I enjoy the scope of your subjects. Always thought provoking and enjoyable. David

Marty Owens January 26, 2010 at 6:23 PM This is a wonderful poem...but crucifixion was a horrible way to die....Marty

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2010 at 12:25 PM A great way to depict the pain there in the last line. It cannot be done! Did you see Mel gibson's movie a while back? I thought it was excellent. Good writing, David! thanks for your comment. luv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire January 25, 2010 at 9:36 PM It's hard to even imagine the pain Christ suffered to save us. This is very "real." I like the honest reflection on the trauma of the crucifixion process. Brings home the tremendous sacrifice He made. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 25, 2010 at 9:29 PM Words of wonder David.. passion too.. as was the crucifixion of Christ was both passionate and loving a sacrifice.. great words of description in both verses.. lets the reader think about the actuality of the act and the comparison.. u make poetry interesting David... very interesting.. thankxxx for enjoying my poetry tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie..