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Consuming Me

She drives that wobbly car
Stacked to the roof with goods
Squalor taunts her thus far
As she hides under hoods

Her babe cries behind bags
Baubles of plastic sneer
Purpose chokes on ball gags
When spending serves to steer

Tears well in her bright eye
While she struggles with rent
How will her child get by
On cash already spent?

She bats those long lashes
As she stands at my door
Wounded bird with gashes
Maybe she’ll need to whore

I long to comfort her
To regulate her pain
Emotions tend to blur
When yanked by Cupid’s chain

So foolhardy with joys
At discovery’s gate
I shed some unused toys
To help her mournful state

I’ve learned to live on crumbs
With circumstance’s ebb
All billionaires and bums
Depart this fateful web

Conjured visions of us
Tease my eroding mind
Intentions won’t cause fuss
When paid forward in kind

Yet her concept of friend
Surely differs from mine
Manipulations end
Alliance once divine

Wounds either kill or cure
What I am meant to be
Yet one truth shines for sure
Love keeps consuming me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/21/2009 6:55:00 AM
This is an masterpiece chalked full of emotions, and love can certanily be consuming, how there is nothing we would't do for the one who makes life worth the trip. a wonderful read.
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Date: 4/15/2009 12:53:00 PM
You really have such a poetic soul! Very nice write! Congratulations on placing in Sami's contest!
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Date: 4/15/2009 6:59:00 AM
Wow, excellent write. Love sure has its grip on you. Warmest congrats on your win in Sami's contest. Well deserved. Love, shar
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Date: 4/14/2009 11:23:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, very well written poem, deserving of a win... constance
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Date: 4/10/2009 7:40:00 AM
This isi well thought out! I enjoyed this, it was different! God bless Erin
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Date: 4/3/2009 2:05:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem John, this girl surely means alot to you, does she know? its a beautiful poem... You watch her so carefully and observe so wonderfully...Thankyou for your comments on my poem, I hadn't ralised Christy has honourably mentioned me, still a bit new, but thank you for taking the time to look me up.. jo x
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