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Consequences of Love

When I woke this morning, I knew something was wrong. My stomach dreamt a dream, For something it had longed. For some oddly reason, I woke up missing you. It panged my heart so bad, When my stomach dreamed of you. I yearned to see you again, And to hear your lovely voice. I would make the wish come true, If I could only make that choice. But you are far away, In a place…where you’re not loved. I wish I could reconcile, With the one…I truly love. To know what I lost, No one will ever know. As the words, “I’m sorry” Echo in my soul. Like an emotional injection, I quickly longed to be with you. Now…I’m left with the side effects, Of not having you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2010 8:07:00 PM
I can truly say that I know how this feels. Very well written my friend. Lots of Love, Misty
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Date: 10/27/2010 3:50:00 PM
i really like this poem and i can relate it'sso crazy not having a loved one near...hopefully you get yur poems published..keep writing.
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Date: 10/17/2010 10:15:00 AM
Very emotive poem Raul!Celene!
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Date: 10/13/2010 9:13:00 PM
deep write, I like how you put in your last stanza, " the side effects", enjoyed reading this one tonight,..P.D.
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Date: 10/13/2010 8:17:00 AM
It is such a pleasure to read your work again, Raul....The soup has not been the same without you. Hope all is well. As always, this is a heartfelt poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/13/2010 4:24:00 AM
Enjoyed your creative and passionate write the pangs of love felt through the stomach, Raul
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