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Collaborating In the Clouds

When I was a child with childish ways, I tried to find you in the sky. When days were warm and clouds were few I fancied I saw you there so high. I spoke to you and you answered me. My ears were so attuned to hear. "I encourage you to dream your dreams And promise to be always near." Then I grew older and I thought more wise, I, from my fancies turned away. The world was new and enticing, Lord And kept me busy every day. I could no longer hear your voice, I seldom looked at the summer sky. For many years I doubted you, Squandering the days as each went by. Now that I am growing old, I’m listening for your voice again. "You know that I've been with you,Child, Through all your joys and in your pain". As summer spreads her fruits around I look up to the bright, blue sky And try to find your face again In cumulus clouds floating so high. By: Joyce Johnson

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Date: 8/5/2021 11:48:00 AM
This is beautiful, Joyce! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/9/2012 1:58:00 PM
congrats Joyce on a most beautiful write and win on this lovely theme of communion with God in the clouds..always wonderful works of art is your poetry luv..
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2012 1:37:00 AM
Joyce congrats on your win...David
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:54:00 PM
Joyce, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:00:00 PM
Joyce, you did your collaborating in the clouds very poetically! How are you doing, sweetie? I don't see you so often these days!
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Date: 6/25/2012 8:46:00 PM
This poem is superb! I love the love in here! Ahhhhhh! Cheers!
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Date: 6/25/2012 3:09:00 PM
Very comforting Joyce! Light & Love
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