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''Collaborating In the Clouds''

~My agonized,withering body lay still in bed. Death approaches,life hanging by a single thread. Cast down twas light through shimmering clouds. I knew,I could feel your shelter. Afraid nevermore. This last breathe,a last sigh. To those with love,my bid goodbye. Please don't deny me,but gratify me. Only to long for righteous words. ~A Voice,pure as the heavens above spoke~ ''Oh child,trust this temple as your home. The tracing of years,your birth to full grown. Embrace thy warmth of everlasting life.''~ written by,kaceymike29 Kacey Greenlee for the Collaborating In The Clouds contest~ sponsor~pd~The Poet Destroyer~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/9/2012 2:00:00 PM
congrats kacey on a most beautiful writ and win for this lovely theme of communion with God in the clouds luv..
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Kacey. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2012 1:38:00 AM
kacey congrats on your win...David
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:55:00 PM
Kacey, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD
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Date: 6/25/2012 6:05:00 PM
This is a great contest idea of PD"s and you and Mike did a doozy of an entry...There is something magical in poetry when a dialogue is involved...I gives more faces to the story I suppose....The last line gives me chills...Can't wait for Him to say that to ME someday...Go get 'em, girl. gwendolen
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Date: 6/23/2012 10:31:00 AM
Good luck in contest Kacey...your words moved me this afternoon. Peace and blessings to you.
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