Collaborating In the Clouds- Gods Hold

If Gods favorite hero suddenly became cold,
   Lonely, disoriented, unhappy with sorrows untold,
   Would it be of interest in Heaven? Concerns of man,
   Would our saviors come to Earth to be born again?

God would send out his best hands to hold,
   Would he set backwards time to where all heroes spirits were sold.

If only our love could behold
   Lined with twine of silver wrapped in gold
   Gifts to to God to wash our sin
   Equipped pillars stories told

Thoughts about God mirrors my pen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/25/2012 10:31:00 PM
Quite mesmerizing Ruth - I remember now oracles sipping on spirit in incensed air,falling on truths and rising too ecstacy - very powerful message here - you are my oracle - with respect, J.A.B. % AF&AM
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Ruth. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2012 1:40:00 AM
Ruth congrats on your win...David
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:55:00 PM
Ruth, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD
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Date: 7/8/2012 12:25:00 AM
thank you
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