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Cold Water

It feels like cold water was just poured on me. Okay, I’m awake now; you’ve got my attention. Are you telling me to simplify my life rather than take on complications? So, remind me: what am I reworking, and why? “Your life, what’s left of it, because your feet are glued to the ground.” And how? “Bury your locomotives and muscle cars; you no longer need brute power, clear away the thorns and sticky bits plugging access to your soul, sweep away dirt and ashes left from other faces, leave those boxes of doubt and guilt in a grimy alley where they belong, hide the clock.” And then? “It may be trite, but give what you’ve made to those who will care, paint landscapes that twitter and green, watch the moonrise then sunset and moonrise again, learn the language of your lover, say goodbye when the time comes, help yourself lean deeply into whatever lies ahead.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/10/2013 10:45:00 AM
I love the introspective quality of this piece. The back and forth, talking to yourself... it makes me think of one who is leaning on the edge of true understanding. Very apt title... and such an inspiring message... lean deeply into whatever lies ahead << you are officially one of my favorite poets on this site!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 3/10/2013 11:03:00 AM
Thanks! That's quite an honor. I haven't yet had time to settle in with your work, but soon...
Date: 2/12/2013 10:01:00 PM
Hello Jack, lovely advice... I'm looking forward into living a life of praise... my favorite line here is "" watch the moonrise then sunset and moonrise again,"" the thought is amazing... thank you..LINDA
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Date: 2/12/2013 10:26:00 PM
You're more than welcome. J

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