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Clouds and Jets

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Waiting again..Just watching jets going here and there..I was also looking at cloud formations..Then a jet flew into a cloud or seemed so from where I was located on the ground..It is also interesting to watch the cloud formations after the jets have been on the scene..

Cloud that looks like wave Is entered by jet Quick exit outside Pilots vision fogged? Clouds follow fast jet Clouds being pulled Or so it seems Air currents flow With the great jet Whispy clouds High flying Fanbrush strokes Airy Fluffy Clouds

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2012 9:41:00 PM

yes, it is fun to look up at the sky and see these kinds of things, Sara. You see magic in many things this way!!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/20/2012 2:48:00 PM

Wonderful piece - I must try this form!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/20/2012 2:15:00 PM

This is delightfully different Sara. love it.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/20/2012 12:46:00 PM

Enjoyed tour beautiful clouds Sara. i must try and write something on clouds myself..)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2012 12:19:00 PM

Sara, a joy to read.. I like Doris, comment..lol.. Seems she knows exactly what you are talking about... Nice and fluffy..pd

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 1/20/2012 10:16:00 AM

Hi sara lovely poem...patrick

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/20/2012 10:11:00 AM

at least he did not showboat like the sinking ship.

Lucinda Cayton
Date: 1/20/2012 1:08:00 PM

thanks for comments on me cloak. do not like friction, sorry if I've offended you.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/20/2012 9:48:00 AM

Beautiful race between cloud and Jet in the sky, enjoyed, bl

Krystal Cochrane

Date: 1/20/2012 8:41:00 AM

I felt like I was looking up at the sky reading this :)

Lucinda Cayton
Date: 1/20/2012 8:42:00 AM

ooops wrong place . sorry.

Lucinda Cayton
Date: 1/20/2012 8:41:00 AM

the pink sky, alot of jet power, makeup factories, put off toxins, the pink is pure toxins, why the lord can STILL make something sop beautiful, out of our monstrerous behaviors, God is love who paints the sky, gives life and takes away.

Lucinda Cayton

Date: 1/20/2012 8:40:00 AM

toximity.