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Chicago Spring

After the dreary, dismal cold days of winter, Bogged down by mounds of snow, Chicago, the indomitable city, Dogged by ears-flapping, bone-chilling winds, Emerges like a blooming flower Fostering liveliness, sensuality, Gaiety and grandiose funfair. Hot, sizzling and sassy summer aside; Invigorating spring first arrives and Jogging along the Lakefront trail or Kicking a soda can down the Magnificent Mile, Life finally emerges from its winter cocoon. Mona Lisa smiles and bright eyes fleeting by, Night life promises a charm of its own with Outdoor patios where cooing lovers linger, Pandering to fans of performing arts and swanky music. Quotidian lives turn into jostling horseplay, Ravishing beds of fragrant shrubs adorn the sidewalks. Spring in Chicago is vivaciously volatile, Temperature, as it rises, so does people's spirits, Under the shadows of imposing skyline or Viewing the serpentine Lake Shore Drive up from Willis Tower's Skydeck, Chicago appears, oh, Xtra beautiful – A spring's paradise! Yellow magnolias, richly painted and sweetly fragrant, Zestfully vying with vibrant clusters of tulips. ~"A Spring Abecedarian" Contest by Shadow Hamilton ~02/19/2015

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Date: 3/5/2015 5:06:00 PM
Creative winning work..The abcs are hidden very well..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:33:00 PM
you wrote very well in this form Abdul. An original idea going with Chicago. Are you living there? congrats.
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Date: 2/28/2015 2:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely spring poem Abdul!
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:22:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 2/27/2015 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings
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Date: 2/27/2015 6:41:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Abdul:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/27/2015 5:59:00 AM
sorry Abdul I had to drop your poem to 5th as you used Xtra which is not a true word hugs
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/27/2015 4:06:00 PM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 2/27/2015 5:49:00 AM
congrats on 1st place Abdul and ty for entering hugs
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Date: 2/21/2015 10:43:00 PM
Wonderful descriptive write, Abdul. Good luck in the contest. Blessing eve
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:48:00 PM
A refreshing write... 7 from me.. best wishes, nad
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/20/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Nadia.
Date: 2/19/2015 10:44:00 PM
Beautifully constructed. I want to go to Chicago. Now.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/20/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Viv. Come on, be my guest!
Date: 2/19/2015 7:19:00 PM
This is outstanding Abdul...I might be biased because I hail from Chicago as well.
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:06:00 PM
Way to go. Viva Chicago! Thanks Tim.
Date: 2/19/2015 7:07:00 PM
beautifully penned Abdul good luck in the contest - i like your take on the theme:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/19/2015 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Jan.

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