Changeling

Somewhere hiding in the shadow of mendacity,
the unsightly gosling awaits the storm to subside.
Gathering knowledge and experience to survive,
she is besieged by thoughts about “how to”.
No matter her direction she faces a wall.
Dilemma after dilemma solved by trial and error.
Exhausted she turns to the lake for comfort.
The silky sensation of caressing water calms her.
Forgetting all the negativity, she resolves anew
to never again feel defeated and mundane.
She vows to live her self for what she is.
Grown, a once ragged babe glides to calmer water.
As the sun kissed the dew on hilltops it silently
moved across the glassy lake seemingly searching.
The gosling, startled out of hushed reverie watched
as her reflection painted itself on the black water.
Ragged yellow feathers, turned beautifully white.
A long slender neck arching gracefully crowned 
the creatures flawless features, each so exquisite. 
The swan smiled to herself.  She was contented.

© Nov 5 2010 Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Gosh, I never could find the right approach to this contest, Charles, but you certainly did! I love the way your swan finds her beauty by staying true to herself. Awesome! Surely a winner. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:10 PM
What a beautiful way to retell the ugly duckling story but with your own unique flavor. Very well done! Best of luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
Peranteau Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:05 PM
P.S..... regarding my "Her true colors"...reproductionists<--hehe; Models, prefer oil ! *smiles* much love, james
Peranteau Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 2:59 PM
A dishonest babe...hm...I like it(Mendacity)..and she was content with it ! Great write dear poet ! Much love, james
Freeman Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 10:27 AM
The beauty of all our destinies await, Charles! Destiny's beauty awaits it manifested clarity of expression. As your swan metaphor poem depicts. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Stopping by today just to thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Always a pleasure to read your poetry Charles. Love,Carol
Iyer Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:29 AM
wonderful expressions. i am impressed. cheers suresh
Dufresne Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 6:43 AM
Hey this is awesome, Charles! Great insight and wonderful write. Enjoyed it much...still smiling....
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Forgetting all the nergativity, she resolves anew... fine expression... yellow feathers turning white....nice images to convey maturity, Charles
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Very impressive write..Interesting to watch that happen to the swan for sure..Thank for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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