Cascade Song

On the barren lava soil,
Windswept pines stretch out their arms,
Gnarled white bones against the sky.

Mountain wears majestic white
Glacier robes that flow between
Buttress ridges of black rock.
 
Rushing rivers tumble down
To the valley, where blue lakes 
Greet like eyes in seas of green.


Written in summer 2016 on the slopes of Mt. Hood
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Beautiful and very majectic. Superb, Agnes.
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations on your win, Agnes. One of the field trips we took were to the lava beds in Klamath in Oregon, fabulous to see ... ~*
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 5:13 AM
A very beautiful place Agnes. I flew over My. Hood so many times and I was always thrilled with the view. Lovely! Congratulations! : )
Barden Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Gorgeous - whimsical and enchanting! Congrats on your HM, Agnes! Blessings, friend! :-)
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations Agnes :)
Chansarkar Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Picturesque and lovely Agnes,congrats!
Krampe Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Thank you, Sara.
May Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:26 AM
Nicely penned.. I especially liked the 1st stanza...Congrats on your win
Krampe Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 2:01 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Thanks, Jan.
Nusker Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 10:32 PM
Lovely description. Congrats on your win, Agnes.
Krampe Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Thanks, Afzal.
Scars Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 10:05 AM
lovely imagery Agnes...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Krampe Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Thank you, luloo.
Canerdy Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:19 AM
A 7 for this beautifully descriptive WINNING poem, Agnes! Janice
Krampe Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 1:09 PM
What amazing imagery and personification Agnes - a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx7
Krampe Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 8:45 PM
wow, this is absolutely beautiful. A FAVE
Krampe Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Thank you, Andrea. We were just visiting Oregon - so beautiful.
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