Captured ~ (A Septolet)

Rain drops
Hypnotic
He sulks
fireside.

The cradle rocks
soothing innocence
woman's perfect snare.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/23/2009 2:51:00 PM
I like this one, Patricia! The tender trap indeed ... Good one! Thank you!
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