Bye Gones

A full heart chokes
too full to feel
anything but broken.
Seems all is lost
and only phantoms linger
must I remain?

A hollow husk, a remnant
yet, engorged and choking 
on maudlin memories lingering
I cannot stop the feelings
the haunted thoughts of loss
surrounded by what’s broken.

Rise up, wrap, beribboned breaks 
yes, I must remain
for others have a need not lost
in pointless, pitiful sobs and choking.
Regain, search, reform to feel
the worth of love which lingers.

A man child grown who has lingered
past the vows which broke 
too full, still, with anger of his own to feel
I must remain 
anxious, prone, and choking
for forgiveness must not be lost.

Let it be forgiveness loosing
let sweet reminiscence linger
un-choked
let the bond of love live unbroken
though soon I must go and he remain
and naught will be left to feel.

For there are many types of feelings
and many ways to lose
what remains
what lingers
the broken
chokings.

Be gone death and loss
remain but joy a lingering
repair my broken life un-choked by grief.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mac Donald Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 10:53 AM
This is beautiful, Debs!! If this were a parcel, the last stanza would certainly be the ribbon and bow holding it all together.:) Lots to feel and consider in this piece...can bring hope and aspiration to the reader!! Wishing you love and good fortune! Love, Mikki
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 23, 2011 at 1:08 AM
Amazing...the thought process of extreme sadness. Yet you remain a strength and a friend to many. Thank you for your friendship, which is a beacon in dark times. God bless your sweet and caring heart. Love, Dane
Akinwande Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 7:09 AM
simply beautiful... great job Debbie...
Devnath  Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Last nine lines shows the clear picture of the former. Loved it the lines, particularly, 'For there are...........Chokings. Thanks, my friend for this another new one. bl
Maverick Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 3:48 PM
Yes i see...still you have by far half the battle won here Debbie, you have confronted what you must i think..? and thats what counts..yours Joe..)
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