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Burma-Shave ******************* * * * Driving Back * * * ******************* ( ) ******************* * * * In Time * * * ******************** ) ( ******************** * * * Dad Recalls * * * ********************* ( ) ************************ * With * * Weathered * * Grin * ************************ ) ( *********************** * Signs * * Of The * * Time * *********************** ( ) *********************** * * * Burma Shave ® * * * ***********************
I asked my Dad what he did, on his long drive to California, as a kid. He tells me he read Burma-Shave Signs. Listening to his recollection, leaning in - I had never heard this before. He tells me they read like poetry. Six in a row, 100 feet apart, at 35 miles per hour, the kids and adults, too, had 3 seconds to read each one. The signs were red with white lettering. Each poem would end with a punch line, like a limerick. In 1925, journey for travelers was lightened up on Hwy 65 from Minneapolis to Albert Lee, whilst shaving cream was sold. I can just see those eyes attentive, the smiles as they looked and read out loud. From across time, I see my grandparents in front, the homemade trailer, behind, and three preteens, a toddler and baby, lumbering along in laid back days. In my childhood, we read the signs that lead to the border, between the Carolinas; we’d arrive at South of the Border.
are we there yet; no need for a screen when a sign will do.

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Date: 8/13/2025 4:52:00 PM
an outstanding write, Kim! Brought back childhood memories of traveling, reading the signs, using license plates to make words...no screens...we used our minds. Like the initial design of this poem...creative indeed, hugs Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2025 6:29:00 PM
As it should be! Still, we connect as poets using technology, so there are pluses and minuses :) Hugs! We did have fun!
Date: 8/13/2025 4:08:00 PM
A sign of the times, my friend. I like you memories of times past. Good luck in the contest, Kim. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2025 6:28:00 PM
Thank you from Georgia! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 8/13/2025 1:33:00 PM
Never even thought of something like this before! Very cool, I am sure you were a sure winner! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2025 2:11:00 PM
We will see!
Date: 8/13/2025 9:13:00 AM
Enjoyed this lots, Kim. It reminded me so much when I was a kid. My dad, mum and four kids stuffed into a little Morris Traveler...no space for luggage...it was all on top. The car had an engine about the size of a small lawnmower. We used to struggle upwards to the summit of Shap, on the Cumbria border, on our way to Scotland. By the time we had got to the top...the car was barely moving...you could have walked faster! And I kid you not! Miss that World more than I could ever express. :) john
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2025 11:27:00 AM
Yes, I love your comment so much! Thank you! Thank you!

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