Bright Monarch

Fluttering magic Barely stopping by today Bright Monarch hurries on

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/25/2019 11:47:00 AM

I love butterflies - 'fluttering magic' so apt, I must learn how to write a kimo!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 3:57:00 PM

They are spiritual messengers, sent by angels if you ask me.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/22/2019 3:11:00 PM

I am glad you like Monarchs also; I feel they are spiritual messengers like dragonflies and cardinals.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/22/2019 1:13:00 PM

After my Mom passed, I walked by my kitchen window and in one of my pear trees was the biggest, brightest Monarch I've ever seen. It was a very windy day and it was hanging onto a whipping tree branch, for dear life. I watched it for about 8 minutes. Beautiful poem about them.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/25/2019 3:57:00 PM

I am glad you like Monarchs also; I feel they are spiritual messengers like dragonflies and cardinals.