Bottles At High Tide

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Raging, inviting. Inscrutable ice.
King Neptune's daughter, her moods are water
You'll never swim in the same ocean twice
She'll wait to decide which bait to provide

The wind in her sail grows to gale at shoreline
She weighs on a scale that you fail to define
while you're walking the plank....

Catch and release is her patent device
Wives tales have brought her whales to the slaughter
You'll receive notice of your sacrifice
She'll leave maps inside bottles at high tide

The trichton that pins you makes marks you will find
like fins on the surface, mean sharks in the brine
Still, you will give in to each heartbreaking tine
while you're walking the plank

She stays docked on the bank...


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05/25/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations on your win! An amazing write.
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June 15, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thank you, Susan! xoxo
George   Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 1:56 AM
Love this Lycia. Many congrats on your first place win. Elaine
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June 14, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, Elaine! Interesting and challenging rhyme scheme, for sure! xoxo
Ligon Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Clever poem. Congrats!
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June 14, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, Juliet! xoxo
Talbot Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Scary, but a super poem! Mick
Harding Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Thank you, Mick. I like that you called it "scary". Boo! Hahaha! xoxo
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