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Booty Call

I watch as she arrives from my bedroom window. creeping up my drive. I open the door, she smiles. we both knew what time it was. Fresh out of the club. she came to me! bodies crying for me. wearing a sweat suit, with nothing beneath. her fragrance, a musky fruit, laying there in her birthday suit. We do what it do!! I feel like a feather, drifting through empty space . No wind, time non-existent.. I've just sinned, and I grin... This girl is not a barbie doll, for me maybe a bit to small. But in our case, We're both considered a booty call... Jared Pickett 11/24/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 11/26/2009 12:11:00 PM
"I feel like a feather, drifting through empty space" remarkable line, loved the way it transcended into a story piece, with a beginning, middle, and end. Nice and subtle...you left room for our imaginations to take over...Raul
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Date: 11/24/2009 8:30:00 AM
New age or is it. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/24/2009 6:34:00 AM
I heard u Jared loud and clear.. great imagery I almost felt I was there.. check your soup mail in a few ... sent some special lines to u... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/24/2009 12:10:00 AM
excellent amusing poetry my friend--Charma
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