Bondage

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Speckled attention flowing through time Flitting from moment to moment Sifts the grime, from pulsations sublime Choosing as of hearts sentiment Free will choice, presupposes options We imbibe but one frequency Our bondage is this limitation Feeling incomplete, in ennui Delusion that we are feeble form Externalised; everything sized Spiralling thoughts, manifesting storms Judgmental eye, each pulse apprised Discernment for now, serves our purpose Though propelled by our hearts desire Thus, if conscience be not our compass We self-block light, our soul aspires 27-May-2021

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Kim Merryman

Date: 5/28/2021 4:24:00 PM

Seeker, congrats on your win in Brian's contest with this well written poem! Blessings, Kim M

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/28/2021 6:52:00 AM

Great poem, Seeker:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/28/2021 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Edward! I better get around to reading the other winning contest entries now!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/27/2021 2:10:00 AM

Liked your poem on free will. In actual fact man has a choice between good and a better good. Choosing evil leads to disaster.