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Blue Moods

Blue moods, intertwine in the skyline— a chipped sapphire's scent trailing the air; sun's own dusk— setting in rising then rain, a cerulean dye for my heart's pallor; rolling down pristine window panes; shadows, a threnodial voice— inside blue moods, time has no stance— only scars paling in the glass; the ticking arrow makes azure whirls of dust— like frames of coma or cold, around my heart— my scream at the equinox— and its bottled and bleak memory.

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Date: 10/3/2023 1:50:00 AM
The reader can feel the emotions you describe so beautifully with colors and nature. Well written, Paige.
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Date: 10/1/2023 4:51:00 PM
Wow, this beautiful piece in all its rawness and depth stirs the soul and touches the heart. I got lost in your words feeling it so profoundly!
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Date: 9/29/2023 5:22:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, so melancholic and heartfelt. I love the flow of your words and your descriptive wordplay that is so exquisitely woven. You have a way with getting readers to feel your thoughts: and those opening lines as well as how you’ve written “ azure whirls of dust” really stood out for me: great use of colors and nature to convey emotions. Fave
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Date: 9/28/2023 10:35:00 PM
This is beautiful - nothing in this poem is overdone (I can get distracted by colour references) but these weave gorgeously and with true meaning. Like a tear rolling down the inside of a pane of glass and you follow the path of its words - love it
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Date: 9/28/2023 7:26:00 PM
Moods come in many colors, and blue is one that reflects sadness or depression. You've painted this emotion with tenderness and beauty. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/28/2023 6:10:00 PM
then rain, a cerulean dye for my heart's pallor…threnodial voice… my scream at the equinox/ I enjoyed very much!
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