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Eidolon - The Halloween Edition Poetry Contest Sponsored by Suzette Richards 10/10/23

Vampire count Vladimir, his pointy fangs appear at bare necks for biting, blood he finds exciting!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/12/2023 6:20:00 AM

Entertaining as always. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2023 11:05:00 AM

Thanks Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Jim Slaughter

Date: 10/11/2023 10:29:00 AM

The pic alone should score a very high position in the contest, Jan. BOL, anyway.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2023 2:27:00 PM

lol Jim the sponsor can only see the poem:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/11/2023 9:11:00 AM

nicely done, jan! i give you credit for trying all these forms, especially since i always stick to the tried and true. best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2023 9:35:00 AM

I love writing humour and rhyme Ilene but thought I would give this one a go, i have only written one before:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/11/2023 12:20:00 AM

Loved this Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2023 2:50:00 AM

Thanks Art, believe me this 'mean girl' certainly means business and is trying to prove she write 'real' poetry lol lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/10/2023 7:51:00 PM

The original Count! Eat your heart out, Muppets! lol.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2023 2:49:00 AM

thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/11/2023 12:19:00 AM

They did have hearts, unlike some evil in the world.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/10/2023 7:20:00 PM

I must admit, I am unfamiliar with the form, but I am in love with this poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2023 2:49:00 AM

it is only the second time I have tried it Jerry:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 10/10/2023 5:16:00 PM

That's a pretty frightening Alexandrine, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2023 5:22:00 PM

thanks Lin, i doubt it is what the sponsor is looking for but i take my chance with contests, as long as i am creative that is the main thing:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/10/2023 2:59:00 PM

Oh my...prowling the streets at night. I guess since Halloween's approaching I best give up my nighttime walks. I enjoyed your creation, Jan. Have a pleasant Tuesday evening, Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2023 3:01:00 PM

Thanks Sara I am not a fan of Halloween it is called Hop Tun Naa over on our little Island. not sure if I have done the poem correctly it is only the second one I've attempted.hugs jan xx