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Black Butterflies

first, it was a single entity an unbrilliant black charcoal sloe female by identity faded shadowy shades of stygian dark slipping in and flitting flower to flower making mark second, two came dancing like onyx layers colors changed sabled ebony players deep dark obsidian pitch male pipeline swallowtails spotty blue indigo sails The final dance black butterflies in the last summer cries separate goodbyes. In apartheid-torn South Africa, poet Ingrid Jonker struggled tragically in search of love and a sense of home. Portrayed in the 2011 movie Black Butterflies

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Date: 5/14/2017 9:16:00 PM
Wow! Brilliant images! Congrats, DM!
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Date: 5/13/2017 3:46:00 PM
Wonderful write yet so heartfelt, DM, congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 5/13/2017 2:08:00 PM
DM, this poem is so wonderful! I am happy to see it in the top three. I was moved by your words. Congratulations! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/13/2017 11:36:00 AM
Hi DM. Congratulations on your win.This is a wonderful portrait of Ingrid Jonker, who represents South Africa in so many ways. The ones who see, often cannot escape from their reality other than in death. This is very well written, Kai
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Date: 10/12/2016 5:58:00 PM
I'm glad I decided to read one of your poems. After reading this poem, I also must say "beautiful poem" and "I'd love to see the film"
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Date: 9/15/2016 7:10:00 PM
Having read your poem I'd love to see the film it sounds fascinating DM:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2016 11:56:00 AM
DM, this is BEAUTFUL, I just love butterflies, well done ~
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Date: 9/10/2016 9:12:00 AM
Missed the movie, your metaphors seem spot on, well done DM...
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