Birdbath Has Limits

. Cold water droplets Increasing impression rings Birdbath has limits

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2011 12:34:00 AM

Hey a cute little limerick i had missed! Great, Sara.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/3/2011 7:57:00 PM

With so few words, your haiku manages to deliver great descriptiveness. I've already had enough of cold.

Wayne Sapp

Date: 2/3/2011 2:04:00 PM

Nicely done; great images!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/3/2011 12:32:00 PM

Nice title signifying the thought of cold water, Sara

Skat A

Date: 2/3/2011 12:08:00 PM

Nice Sara, gives me the chills.. just to imagine the water droplets. Great poem by the way. take care..luv~Skat

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/3/2011 10:19:00 AM

Quite a compelling image you have painted here, Sara. Love, Carolyn

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 2/3/2011 10:15:00 AM

DEAR SARA, COULD YOU PLS EXPLAIN TO ME THE REAL MEANING OF THIS POEM? I FEEL IT AS GREAT!

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/3/2011 9:27:00 AM

great imagery Sara:) Thanks for your comments on 'haiku for all seasons', much appreciated!