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Bells Contest sponsored by Kim Rodriguez

December 6, 2023

Sleep lifted its gossamer veil from my eyes this morn before dawn's roseate beams of light had been born. Silence reigned as the world around me still slept. I watched a cat in the garden as it stealthily crept. Towards prey it encroached, on a songbird trilling. To let nature take its course today, I was not willing. I opened the window to chase the stalking feline away, and heard the distant chiming of bells holding sway. Sunlight peered through clouds with a glow of inflection, and the songbirds I'd saved, sang a melody of perfection. "Ring, bells of hope." I whispered as night was breached. "Ring out to empty hearts that faith has never reached." If only the sonorous sounds of the bells could be heard, would mankind accept the truth of God's written word? Would the warring of nations then come to and ending, and peace among races of men never again need mending? I listened and prayed for all men to join in a brotherhood. "Ring aloud so all may feel the need for love as they should." Blaring horns and loud voices intruded upon my tranquility. I closed the window from the world's clamorous hostility.

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Date: 12/12/2023 6:26:00 PM
This is so creatively put together Lin, congrats on your win
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Date: 12/12/2023 11:07:00 AM
Lin, you so skillfully put me right at your window with you feeling the cool pre-dawn air, watching the sunrise and the feline! There are so many emotions packed into your words! I, along with you, pray that every heart will come to accept "the truth of God's written word" letting it ring like a bell of new awareness so we may truly become "people of Good Will" closing out "clamorous hostility." Your poem is a beautiful prayer. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and prayers with yours.
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Date: 12/12/2023 5:50:00 PM
I'm always so glad to read your comments, Sam. There is so much that we should be grateful for, but take for granted. I'm also grateful that you read it as if it were a prayer, and it is for me. Thank you for such gracious comments.
Date: 12/12/2023 9:00:00 AM
Lin, great imagery! I loved following the cat, stealthily creeping, encroaching towards its prey. I could see you opening the window, chasing away the cat and hearing the chiming bells. The lines of the last two verses ring out loud and clear! Congratulations on 3rd place! ~ Kim
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Date: 12/12/2023 10:00:00 AM
I am so very pleased you enjoyed my story of bells enough to have placed it on your winner’s list. Thank you, Kim.
Date: 12/6/2023 5:22:00 PM
A wonderful poem my friend. A true contender for the contest win. "Ring out to empty hearts that faith has never reached." is a brilliant line Lin. Good luck on the contest and have a blessed evening.
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Date: 12/7/2023 7:34:00 AM
Hi Jerry and thanks for the supportive comments. I always appreciate your remarks.
Date: 12/6/2023 4:42:00 PM
a profound and thought-provoking poem, Lin. This line grabbed my heart:""Ring, bells of hope." I whispered as night was breached. "Ring out to empty hearts that faith has never reached." I yearn for the chaos of today's world to end and ' feel the need for love.' Powerful ending...great contest contender. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 12/7/2023 7:33:00 AM
We sure seem to always be in sync, Sara. It's mine, too. My evening was fine, and I hope all of yours are.
Date: 12/6/2023 3:18:00 PM
Very nice, Lin. I would have chased away the cat also. It seems to me that killing is more profitable than peace. Good luck:)
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Date: 12/7/2023 7:33:00 AM
I love cats, but the morning was too perfect to have it marred by that hungry kitty. Thanks, Danny.
Date: 12/6/2023 1:38:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Lin, all we can do is play our part to try and make it a better world. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 12/7/2023 7:32:00 AM
Your finger is on the right keys, Tom. Thank you for reading and commenting. Take it easy.
Date: 12/6/2023 1:06:00 PM
WOW!!!! What a lovely write/pretty picture. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
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Date: 12/7/2023 7:31:00 AM
Thanks so much for your 'wow' Paula. I'm writing today.

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