Bathed In the Anguish of Golgotha

I am a dog of Caanan. Protector of Israels settlements,
and scavenger of the deserts. Cowed in movement and
strangled with inhuman voice, I feed upon the waste
of the crowds that gather about your lingering soul

Traipsing around the anguish of the Golgotha crucified, I 
smell their departing  vapours. Yet, each step around
your fading ruin ignites a crucifixion within me. 
Impaling me to your cross.

I hang upon your sorrow like a broken scarecrow, and 
linger at your feet, hoping to be remembered in the
land to come. But, all I see is a simple man, pained to 

the end of his tether. Shedding tears that fall from pain 
filled eyes, as desperate for earthly release, as he is for 
heavenly deliverance. Tears that nourish the dirt where 
they fall and bless the heads of those who stand close

Loping between the legs of your faithful, I nip the ankles of
your accusers, a rightful dispenser of their pennance. Final
miracles are demanded but no longer heard, the weak of faith
tumble away like brittle leaves, blown by the frailest of winds. 

Eliciting akward glances that feed my empathy, and soul
wrenching moments drained by your despair. No longer 
cowed by man and his craven destructions, I sit at the
foot of your cross, resolutely guarding your ascendency.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/9/2015 5:49:00 PM
'...I hang upon your sorrow like a broken scarecrow,' ...('he's) as desperate for earthly release as he is for heavenly deliverance,' '...I sit at the foot of your cross, resolutely guarding your ascendancy,' '...I nip the ankles of your accusers.' You sound like a man of faith here, so pained at his crucifixion. Well done Terry. Keith
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Date: 12/1/2015 9:04:00 AM
A gut wrenching picture of the soul's journey toward faith in Christ. Well done! An easy seven for me.
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Date: 11/28/2015 1:19:00 PM
Such love that all of creation takes notice! Fantastic poem!
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Date: 11/28/2015 12:27:00 PM
Terry, this is an amazing write! Such vivid descriptions and a unique perspective from the eyes of a dog. Even animals know who Jesus is! Love, Kim
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