Avoiding the Flames

You are in your blue period -
turquoise swimsuit, buoyant in azure.

Behind your shoulder,
Brighton West Pier,
A snap taken at an amateurish angle,
you’re diving sideways into the waves,
the gaily painted structure
tumbling after you.

A day later, the pier burnt down.  
Charred wooden bones,
black skeletal pilings stumped naked.

Vaudeville, lyceum, taproom, and arcade
once rocked beneath bunting and banners
now only wrecked rafters,
broken fingers grasping still at yesterday. 

A hint of flames behind your image,
an esplanade crumbling
scorched waves.

It's the blue that saves you –
Your wide open blue eyes
your goofy blue bathing cap.

The photo is blistering,
    it was a close thing,
nobody yelled fire when I took it.


~~~~~

The pier closed to the public in 1975 and fell into disrepair for decades,
However, on the 5th of February 2003 the historic U.K. Pier
was engulfed in flames.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/19/2021 2:17:00 PM
Eric, your words paint a vivid picture! I enjoyed reading this! Blessings, Kim M
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/1/2021 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Kim, good of you to comment.
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